After making a radical bend in the side walls, I realized that the RFZ treatment (colored green) area now impacts the angled “rear/side” walls. Now my room ended up almost identical to Gervais’ example. I think I understand now why he did it that way.
Yep!

There's often really good reasons behind the things we do... and don't do!
I moved the mix position (red circle) forward 10 1/8” forward (38% of the room length from the front)
Excellent! That was an important change. In your case it doesn't really have to be 38%: that's only for rectangular rooms (and' its not even a rule anyway: just a rough guideline), but it was still necessary to bring the mix position forwards. I would probably bring it even further forward.
The speakers and the focus point Form an equilateral triangle, although I wonder just how important that really is.
It isn't.

The side legs do have to be the same length, of course, but they don't have to be the same as the base (the distance between the speakers). That can change. which of course also implies a change in the speaker angles. The principle consequence is a change in shape of the sweet spot: making it more oval (either wider-than-long or longer-than wide), and a change in the sound-stage: spreading it more broadly,or narrowing it down. In both cases, that can be useful, as long as you don't over-do it.
I’ve seen references, I believe, and quotes of John that the angles can be up to 45 degrees.
Yup! Any angle between about 20° and 45° is possible. However, the more extreme you get, the further you are away from a "normal" control room, in terms of sound-stage spread, mostly. I try to stay within a range of about 25° to 35°, mostly.
I’m a bit tempted to widen the space between the speakers and maintain the same focal point.
Sure! Why not! It would give you more depth behind the speakers inside the soffit, which is always useful for framing and damping, and it would help your acoustics too.
I’m going to work on re-drawing the new layout in 3-D for framing so we can get a Bill of Materials put together. I’ve got a framer partner who is ready and a group of restless people eager to see progress.
A word to the wise: Do not rush! (OK, that's 3 words, not 1, so let me try again:) Patience! It would be a big mistake to start framing if your design is not fully complete, en every detail. I know you've been going at this for a long time already, and probably the pastor and the volunteers are getting a bit tired of not having a studio yet, but I'd really urge you to still take your time, and not rush things. There's a saying about the type of people who rush when angels don't...
For example, looking over your rough sketches so far, I don't see any provision for HVAC! That is critical. You still need to do all the calculations for that, to make sure you have your air flow rates and air flow velocities and air changes per hour and duct sizes and static pressure and latent heat loads and sensible heat loads and silencer box internal cross sectional ares and duct sizes and register sizes and open areas, and all the rest of it in order.... When I'm designing a complete studio, I often end up taking more time to design the HVAC system than I do to design all the rest of it together! It's a slow process...
I also don't see your framing plan for the soffits... that's also critical. You have to hold those speakers and the front baffles very rigidly, and have plenty of mass on there.... it's not evident on your sketches.
Your treatment plan is also on the lean side...
So please please please, slow down and don't do what the angels fear to do...
I’m going to work on re-drawing the new layout in 3-D
Yup!!!! When you have that done, feel free to post it here, so we can download it and rip it to shreds for you!
- Stuart -